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Emprint
07-06-2004, 12:34 PM
Demon: Strange As Angels
Episode 3: Little Earthquakes

The first two episodes are covered in this thread (http://forum.rpg.net/showthread.php?t=78045).

Previously

Xariel, a former angel of deaths and endings, finds himself in the body of retired police detective Max Harris. Helping out Max's onetime protege, Mitch Robinson, Xariel discovers that Sandalphon, the former Throne of Woven Prayers, is ripping the dreams from teenage runaways, stealing secrets from their souls.

The Cast

Xariel- A fallen angel in the body of retired police detective Max Harris. (Player character.)

Mitch Robinson- Max's protege and former partner.

Labazar- An angel of the wild in the body of conspiracy journalist Quint Whiteman.

Sandalphon- Once the Throne of Woven Prayers, now the Dominion of Dreams Devoured.

----

The war.

On a hundred levels of reality, a battle rages. The sky is the color of fire. Angels fight wars among the clouds and the rocks and the atoms.

In that way, this is a day like any other. In another, however, today is unique. For even as the Razor Fangs of the Jungle strangles the Seventh Northern Light with a whip made from the bones of a spirit named Loyalty, humans fight on the ground below. There is sound, and fury, and blood. Clumsy, awkward, and murderous, they wrestle and bite. One of them lies on the ground, his eyes blinded by the radiance of the Seventh Northern Light, and his throat torn open by his sister.

Xariel isn't watching this. He's standing in the dark courtyard which is the man's heart, surrounded by blackness and crumbled stone. Usiel, Throne of the Sundered, stares at him across a fountain which has nearly stilled. Each of the drops of water which fall from the fountain is a heartbeat. Warily, the two angels circle the fountain, opposite each other. The drops slow. Usiel's hands shift on his scythe. Xariel's tighten about the twin blades called Fate's Precipices.

The last drop begins to form. As it grows and then falls, Usiel drops his scythe to one hand and catches the drop. In the same motion, he turns and takes flight, moving through dozens layers of reality like so many colors of white fog.

Xariel gives chase, flying through the fog and the fairy lights, but the end of his journey is a place he cannot go.

Because God won't let him.

Scene 1- Max's Apartment

Cloudy, grey daylight pulls Xariel from the dream much more slowly than he would have liked. He goes through the chores cleaning his body, resenting them a little less than before. He's getting used to them, and, besides, he's got other things on his mind.

He reads through the paper more quickly than usual- there's a lot more stuff about LA today. The ground is still shaking, and rescue workers are facing a host of challenges even entering the city.

Xariel puts a quick phone call in to Labazar to find out where he needs to perform the ritual. The Devourer warns him again not to look in the envelope, then gives him an address.

Xariel heads downtown.

Scene 2- Ricardo's Bar and Grill

Ricardo's is a little restaurant in the South Loop. This early in the morning, nobody's around. With a little help from Max's lockpicks, Xariel gets into the kitchen through the back door. In the basement storeroom, he finds what he's looking for- a maintenance hatch into the old rail tunnels.

Scene 3- The Tunnels

Built around the turn of the twentieth century, Chicago's electric rail tunnels were one of those great ideas that turns out to be completely unworkable. Abandoned since the fifties, they remain intact and utterly useless, probably the sturdiest of any of the bits of history snaking around beneath Chicago.

All of this is rather academic to Xariel. Max was in the tunnels once, ferreting out a drug dealer who kept his stock down here. The trip down was not so tiring, that time. After a forty foot climb down, the angel stops to rest, leaning against the smooth concrete of the wall.

He walks a little, finds an intersection in the tunnels, and sets the candle down. He looks at the little ice crystals forming on the side for a moment, then lights the candle. Carefully, he burns the piece of hair he took from Jill.

The candle lets loose a little rush of blue flame. Xariel crosses over amid a flicker of strange shadows.

In the spirit world, the candle is encased in ice.

"Hello," says a voice from the shadows. A little girl steps out, maybe thirteen, wearing a pink babydoll t-shirt that says ?angel? in glitter, and carrying a Hello Kitty purse, the one that doubles as a backpack. Xariel leans down.

"Who are you?" he asks, in slightly grandfatherly tones. She shrugs.

"I'm lost."

"So you are. I've been told you know where something of mine is." He offers the envelope.

"Your blades."

"Yes."

"They're down that way." She points down a particularly dark and ominous tunnel. Xariel looks down the tunnel, then hands her the envelope.

"Would you mind if I come and see you again, sometime?" he asks.

"That would be nice. Just don't get killed."

"Oh, that won't happen." Xariel smiles a bit.

"Why not?"

"Because, little lady, I'm death."

She leans her head to the side, and looks at him for a moment. "Oh, that's convenient."

The lost girl walks off down a tunnel, then pauses.

"There's one more thing," she says. Xariel raises his eyebrows. "Don't look back."

She continues her walk down the tunnel. Faintly, Xariel hears a rustling of paper, and the little girl's voice. "I always knew that's who I was!"

Xariel walks down the tunnel, then, thinking better of it, spreads his wings. He flies down the tunnel, aware that it seems to grow wider and longer as he travels along it. He hears and sees echoes of the dead, people and events that are so blurred as to be indistinguishable but yet tarry here.

As he flies, he hears a voice behind him.

XARIEL.

Xariel doesn't acknowledge it. He flies on.

YOU SEEK TO RECLAIM YOUR WEAPONS.

"Yes."

WHAT MAKES YOU BELIEVE THIS WILL END ANY BETTER THAN THE LAST TIME?

Xariel pauses. "Who are you?"

I AM THE THIRD.

There is a moment of silence.

ONCE YOU RAISE YOUR SWORD AGAIN, XARIEL, YOU CANNOT TURN BACK.

"I'll keep that in mind," Xariel says, Max's smirk in his voice. The Third is silent, and Xariel sees that he's coming to an open chamber.

There's a large, simple box, made of either marble or concrete. Xariel knows the place, now- he may have hid the weapons here himself, in the last days of the war. To the distant tune of strange chanting, he shoves the lid off of the box. It hits the ground and crumbles.

Inside, he finds his blades. They have changed, though the patterns are familiar. The scalpel is small and gleaming silver-white; the sword is now a rapier, made of black ice with crimson veins crawling through it. He barely notices the chanting growing louder.

They approach him from either side, two robed, monkish figures. They speak in low, hissing voices while somehow continuing to chant.

"Revenge. Breakyourbones, clawyoureyes."

Xariel brandishes the sword in warning, but they advance.

"Eatyourflesh, takeyoureyes, burnthesockets."

Moving too far in a single step, one of them surges forward and grabs onto Xariel, digging long, yellowed nails into him. He jabs the scalpel into it and, released from its grip, takes to the air.

The other spectre claws at Xariel's leg. He swoops down at it, the sword natural as it can be as it pierces the ghost's chest. He pulls the blade free and turns, scratching the first spectre across its face as it moves to attack again. Hissing more unlikely torments to themselves, they retreat, fading away into the cold air.

Xariel heads back. As he bends down to retrieve the candle, he hears that voice again.

XARIEL.

"Give it up. I'm not going to look back."

RETURN TO THE DAYLIGHT, THEN. KNOW ONE THING, THOUGH.

"What's that?"

SHE DIDN'T MEAN NOT TO TURN AROUND.

Xariel puts the candle back in his bag, and begins the trip back up.

Scene 4- Max's Apartment

Xariel walks briskly into the apartment, tossing his pack down by the door and walking over to the phone. Or that's what he would do, anyway, if there weren't a woman standing in his way.

The woman is looking at his wall, scanning the notes arrayed there. She's around his daughter's age, a little younger, say twenty-eight or so. Brown hair falls to her neck in businesslike curls, and she wears a pinstriped suit. A leather attache case sits on his couch, presumably hers.

She smiles and offers her hand.

"I'm Stephanie Hart. You're Detective Harris?"

He nods, a little suspicious.

"Your door was unlocked. I didn't think you'd mind if I came in to wait for you." There's a beat, and she doesn't get the response she expected. "I'm with Lexington-Branche?"

Xariel smiles- or at least tones down Max's glare- and offers her coffee. She accepts.

"May I call you Max?"

Xariel smiles, for real this time. "Go ahead."

As he putters around the kitchen, Stephanie explains that Branche is working on behalf of the Frost family- at a reduced rate, no less. She's been told that Max is assisting the department, and wanted to talk to him personally.

She explains that the family is looking for closure, and that neither of the ongoing investigations has come up with anything to suggest that it was anything other than a drug overdo--

"It wasn't an overdose," Xariel interrupts. He pauses, then adds, "Nothing on the autopsy report suggested that."

"We're having additional tests done, but on excised tissue. The family would like to have a proper funeral." Her expression softens. "You understand, Max, they need this."

"I understand. But someone has to make sure that what was done to her doesn't happen again."

On cue, Stephanie's eyes drop. "Such a shame," she says. "Kids come to the city, they get mixed up in drugs, crime..."

Max isn't buying the guilt-and-gloom line, though. "Miss Hart, we both know damn well that wasn't a drug overdose."

"Max, you have to let go of this case. Please."

"No." Xariel stares at her, hard, through Max's blue eyes.

Stephanie picks up her briefcase and says, crisply, "Detective Harris, it's unfortunate you chose not to cooperate. Rest assured, you will be hearing from us again." She storms out, slamming the door behind her.

I'm sure I will. And I'm sure I locked that door.

He goes over and inspects the lock. Not damaged. I'd better at least do something to stop it from slamming like that.

Xariel goes to turn the coffee off. As he turns towards the kitchen, there's a rough knock on the door. He takes an annoyed breath, and looks through the peep-hole.

It's not Stephanie again, that's for sure. In fact, it's Sandalphon's brawny deadman.

Old tricks work the best. For the second time in as many days, Xariel flings the door open and slides backwards, gun trained on his visitor. The deadman stalks in. He's dressed the same as before, except that the shirt's pink and pinned up to cover his right stump.

"The boss would like to arrange a meeting," he says gruffly.

"I'm sure he would," Xariel smiles. "Where?"

"His place."

"I don't think so. Neutral ground."

The deadman snarls, but says "Where?"

"The Institute. Sunday in the Park."

Sandalphon's bruiser looks suspicious. "I'll tell him. Five o'clock."

Xariel quirks his eyebrows. Guess it's a little late for High Noon. He nods, and the thug storms out. Xariel catches the door before it can slam, though.

The angel starts making phone calls.

First, Labazar. Xariel lets the angel of the wild know that he retrieved the blades, and that he's got a meeting with the Dominion.

"What's his cover?" Xariel asks.

"His host? Real estate baron named Simon Holmes." Facts click together in Xariel's mind. "Owns a gentleman's club called The Thunderbolt. Kind of a frat house for the rich and shady."

"He's into revitalizing?"

"So I hear. He works with other firms a lot, though. Makes keeping track of him a full time job."

"Ah, Quint, one other thing."

"Yeah?"

"Ever heard of someone called the Third?"

Labazar pauses. "One of us, you mean?"

"I think so."

"Guess I know better than to ask 'third what?'" He sighs. "I'll see what I can turn up."

"Thanks."

Labazar lowers his voice. "Be careful, Xariel."

"I will." There's a moment more of silence, then Labazar hangs up.

Xariel starts making his other calls. Between a little smooth talking the security personnel and a call to Mitch, he arranges to be able to bypass security at the Institute, then heads out.

Scene 5- Art Institute

After some dinner, Xariel walks into the Institute. After a quick conversation at the security desk, he's ushered around the metal detectors. Xariel thanks the security chief, and reminds him he doesn't want any security personnel conspicuous when he meets his "informant."

Xariel's still a little early. He sits down on a bench and looks at the Suerat. Max brought his kids here. And his wife before that. Before she was his wife.

Various people are milling about, but Xariel still hears Sandalphon's footsteps approaching. He stands up to meet the Dominion, who nods to his deadman. The bruiser moves cautiously off to a corner.

Xariel looks Sandalphon over as the man takes off his leather gloves. He's a young forty, his black hair receding, but what's left is still shiny and full. Straight and well-gelled, it comes down to the top of Holmes's neck. His features are sharp, handsome, much like his suit.

Holmes's eyes, black and deep, catch Max's. The expression, at least, is familiar. Collected and more than a little fierce, it's Sandalphon's. Damned if I can remember when , though.

"Xariel, right?"

Xariel nods. "Sandalphon."

"I'm sorry about my associate. I didn't realize who you were when I sent him."

"I'm sure you didn't."

"Believe me, I don't mean any harm."

Xariel's mouth curls. "No, you haven't caused any of that."

Sandalphon purses his lips, then sighs. "I take it you're a friend of Torimel's, then?"

We both were, Xariel thinks, but says nothing.

"I see her vigilante justice approach rubbed off on you. Let me explain my side of things."

Sandalphon continues in the same formal, "Was this Max Harris a religious man?"

"He got by."

"Perhaps, then, he remembers the story of Saul. A wicked man, persecuting God's chosen people. He saw a light, and was converted. Or Constantine- an emperor of Rome- who switched sides after seeing a light in his dreams. Even Moses received his orders from a burning bush.

"Starting to see a pattern here? Flames. Light. Those were somebody's signature, once upon a time."

"Lucifer," Xariel says, and the word hangs in the air.

"Yes, Lucifer," Sandalphon continues, hissing a little with muffled anger. "Playing for the other team, now. Probably was the whole time. Don't tell me that's never occurred to you."

"It has."

"But I've been back. For twelve years, this time around. And never a trace of the Morningstar. He's hiding, Xariel, he and our Father."

"And you're going to find him."

"Yes."

"By torturing children."

Sandalphon sighs. "Yes. Regrettably."

"Then you've lost sight of everything. We were put here to love them, and to serve them."

"And then forbidden to. Don't think I don't remember." Frustration tears at the edges of Sandalphon's voice. "I remember all too well. I remember collecting each and every one of their prayers. Every blessing said in His name, every oath consecrated upon His altar. I took every one from their lips and set it upon His brow. All the while they didn't even know I was there." He looks down at his feet.

"I won't let you continue."

"He sent three angels to forgive Cain. Three. And all he offered us was obedience or oblivion."

Xariel turns away for a moment. Some of the facts are new, but he's thought every one of these thoughts before. One after another, strung together through strange aeons in the abyss.

"I said I'll stop you."

"I suppose we have Max to thank for that nobility. I suppose we--" Sandalphon is cut off by a tap on his shoulder. The bruiser whispers something in his ear.

"I'm sorry, Xariel, I have to cut this short. We'll talk again soon."

"We will," Xariel nods.

Xariel watches the angel and his lackey exit, then returns his gaze to the painting. There aren't many museum-goers about, anymore, and he has relative silence. Nonetheless, precious few thoughts come.

Tired, Xariel walks out to the lobby, only to find a crowd gathered around a TV monitor, tuned to a cable news channel. A label above the ticker reads "Live: Los Angeles."

"This is, uh," the reporter sputters, flickering light illuminating her face. "Uh, just show them." The screen switches to another camera, a shaky, handheld one. The camera pans up on what looks like, at first, an immense orange-white glow. It zooms out clumsily, then, and the crowd sees what it is.

Above the jagged remains of Los Angeles skyscrapers, a huge figure made of fire stands. The focus is horribly off, but somehow the chiseled figure of a Michelangelo statue is visible, as are the mighty, graceful wings adorning his back. Clearest of all is the expression, smiling lovingly between outstretched arms.

The audience gasps. They see an angel. But Xariel sees something else. He sees the angel. Lucifer, star of the morning, prince of Heaven and Earth.

It is October twenty-ninth, the Year of Our Lord two thousand and three.

The Devil's Night has begun.

Emprint
07-06-2004, 02:19 PM
And, finally, we see a tiny bit of the Demon metaplot, which means I don't have to be quite so hardcore about keeping my player away from Demon discussion online.

This was the second-to-last episode of series 1; last night, we played the first session of series 2.

Kurotowa
07-06-2004, 03:03 PM
And, finally, we see a tiny bit of the Demon metaplot, which means I don't have to be quite so hardcore about keeping my player away from Demon discussion online.

This was the second-to-last episode of series 1; last night, we played the first session of series 2.

Neat! It's great to see this Actual Play series back. I'm almost tempted to look into getting Demon because of it. If I had the right group, maybe maybe....

Emprint
07-07-2004, 06:53 AM
Thanks, Kurotowa. I'll try and get the fourth episode writeup polished and posted soon.

Emprint
07-27-2004, 10:01 AM
Demon: Strange As Angels
Episode 4: Wicked Game

Scene 1- Lobby, Art Institute of Chicago

The crowd is silent, eyes fixed on the monitor. Lucifer's perfect face looks benevolently downward upon Los Angeles, and there's a burst of static. He rises up into the air, and shimmers out of existence against the smoke-blackened sky.

The museum-goers begin to whisper amongst themselves. A real angel. Xariel, though, heard what Lucifer said. He wanders out into the downpour, feeling waves of faith from all directions, warming him despite the cold rain.

He steps across the veil easily, barely feeling it as it passes by. The angel smiles. Just like the old days. And then he remembers Lucifer's words, and grits his teeth.

Xariel takes flight, speeding across Chicago at the speed of thought.

Emprint
07-27-2004, 10:02 AM
Scene 2- Whiteman's Apartment

Labazar won't take his eyes off the TV, even as he lets the other angel in. Xariel looks around, finding, with a bit of difficulty, a clear space to set his soaked hat.

"You saw this." Labazar's not asking.

"Yes."

"Un-fucking-believable." Labazar fumbles with the remote, restarts the segment. He keeps staring at the television. "That's him. Can fake a moon landing. But you can't fake that."

"We have to go there."

"You mean you have to go there. I can't leave the area; the Dominion took care of that when he declawed me."

A smile plays across Xariel's face. "Try again."

Labazar rolls his eyes, but tries anyway. A mental flex, and his hand extends into a monstrous, bear-like claw. He smiles down, looking at it. "Hey, I could get used to this. Again, I mean." He lets out a growl, surprising himself with how real it is, then lets the claw slip.

"The rules have changed, Labazar. People are believing in him."

Labazar grimaces. "You heard his warning, I take it."

"I heard it." Xariel's mind flickers back. The static in the transmission. Static to everybody else, anyway. Do not interfere with the humans again. I will be watching. It stings. More than Xariel wants to admit. "What do you know about us out there? Can you set us up with any contacts?"

"Who's this 'we', kemosabe?"

Xariel looks at him expectantly.

"Well, there's more of us out there than most other places, anyway. Like London or Tokyo. I know a few other people, journalistic contacts, too." He can't suppress a laugh. "I hear Remiel's in some kind of a moon cult. I'll see what I can do."

"Thanks. I've got a loose end to tie up."

That's what's been bothering Xariel, of course. Leaving Chicago means leaving it to Sandalphon. Nursing that thought, as well as Lucifer's words, he takes flight through the land of the dead.

Emprint
07-27-2004, 12:42 PM
Scene 3- The Spirit World

Xariel finds the wreckage of Haven in turbulence. The part he's emerged into looks like the wreckage of Chicago after a parade of blockbuster disaster movies. Earthquakes, floods, and of course fires have ravaged bits and pieces of a hundred different eras. He can feel the veil moving, too- events in Los Angeles have changed the rules in more than one place. He can even feel the rain from the material world, albeit only as a light tingling.

Xariel hears, feels ghosts moving all around them. Walking through the debris of some townhouses, he finds a few huddled around a barrel fire. One of them, a teenage boy in rags, challenges him.

"What are you?"

"That's complicated. I'm a guardian of sorts."

The boy looks a little suspicious. "A ferryman?"

Xariel contemplates his appearance. "You might say that."

"I heard you was all gone."

"And what have you heard about us?"

The ghost explains a little bit about the Ferrymen, supposedly ghosts raised up above the others as protectors, who kept the spectres at bay. He's never seen one, though- he's only been around for a few years. The last time anybody he's met saw one was before the Maelstrom. In response to the obvious question, the kid tells Xariel that the Maelstrom was twelve years ago.

As the ghost goes back to his fire, Xariel tries to remember when the crack in the Abyss opened, but that's more than a little hard. It's shifty, like trying to figure out how long ago the war was. On the other hand, he knows Sandalphon has been out about that long. And that reminds him. Time to see the wizard.

Emprint
07-27-2004, 01:29 PM
Scene 4- The Spirit World, outside Sandalphon's club

Xariel strides through the spirit world, noticing that the veil is thinning in many places. In the South Loop, he can actually see passersby in the physical world, or at least their souls, lit from within by life and faith. It's that faith- confused, wavering, but present- that's changing the rules.

The angel stops outside the Thunderbolt, staring at the graffiti as rain drips down the wall. Bright, stylized signatures of blue and red and orange streak the walls.

"Sandalphon," Xariel whispers gravely.

The graffiti swims, and the figure of a man- of Simon Holmes- appears, the paint clinging to him like a skin. As he smiles, the graffiti patterns across his body become more defined. They change from airbrushed paint to the colored shadows of a stained glass window, casting light down upon Sandalphon in brilliant orange and blue.

"You've seen the news, then?" Sandalphon asks.

"Yes. I'm going."

Sandalphon gives a small wave. "You'll let me know if you find anything?"

Xariel pauses a moment, then "Yes, I will." Another pause. "There's no reason for you to continue taking secrets."

Sandalphon shakes his head, gracefully displaying sadness and resolve. "There is. Lucifer's long gone from Los Angeles, I'm sure. And so many questions remain. I need the answers."

"There will always be questions, Sandalphon." Xariel thinks of Max's days on the force. 'Who did it?,' and 'why,' then 'why' again. "The nature of questions is to lead to other questions."

"That's why I'm looking for our Father. He will have all the answers. And one day, one of these children will lead me to Him."

They face each other, the rain scattering around them.

"You know I can't let you do that."

"I don't remember you being so fiery. I wonder... is that Xariel speaking, or Max?"

"Maybe it's both."

Sandalphon smiles, almost paternally. "Let's find out, then. You've made friends since you came back, and even Max had one or two. Who matters more?" The blue and orange stained-glass patterns separate and flow down either side of Sandalphon, turning into swirling balls in his hands. "For the sake of the experiment, I think I can deal with just one secret. Who do you value more? Detective Robinson, or Miss Thompson?"

Xariel's stare bores into Sandalphon's eyes as he reaches for his sword. But Sandalphon only nods, and the balls of light fly off in different directions. Deprived of their light, the figure of Sandalphon vanishes. His voice rattles in the raindrops.

"Fly, Angel of Unhappy Endings. Rescue your friend."

Emprint
07-28-2004, 10:56 AM
Scene 5- Angel Sanctuary

Max's figure appears across the street from the shelter, the rain scattering around him. He strides in, letting the door hang open behind him and the rainwater pool in the entrance. No one in the kitchen. Kids asleep in the bedrooms.

Xariel races up the steps to Jill's office. She's there, unconcious, her mouth working and biting her lip in her sleep. He puts a hand to her neck... her pulse is racing. Without even stepping back, he crosses over.

In the spirit world, Jill floats, sleeping but screaming as tendrils of red fire pierce in and out of her, cleaving chunks of spirit away with every thrust.

Xariel doesn't know what Jill's seeing, but he can guess. Endless, lightless streets, and something hunting her relentlessly down. He goes to work with the scalpel, its gleaming white edge cutting apart the flame. Then, having a little room to work, he reaches into her, drawing out her spirit into himself. She flows into him, almost too easily. He takes flight. I don't know if I can do this. But I have to.

Xariel flies into the heart of the Tomb, towards the inscription. Sandalphon's sending turns into a fiery, winged figure and gives chase.

Reaching the inscription, Xariel lands. The signatures were infused with angelic repentance, carved- perhaps literally- with tears. As the rainwater floods across the letters, Xariel pushes Jill's soul out, into the names, anchoring her to their sorrow and resolve.

The angel turns, then, and draws his blade, taking to the sky, flying towards the sending. The fiery creature snarls at him with Sandalphon's face, and whips out its tendrils. Xariel feints, then runs it through. The flames are suddenly dampened by the rain, and the spirit collapses into smoke, then into plain, damp ashes.

He looks back briefly at the inscription- he doesn't know how long it will hold. He turns, and spreads his wings.

Craig Oxbrow
07-28-2004, 11:52 AM
These writeups give a strong sense of a story being told, terse but poetic.

Professional Lurker
07-28-2004, 12:07 PM
I really am impressed, not just with how intriguing your game seems, but how you create such a brilliant narrative out of a game session.

How do you go about translating a session to this story? Obviously you’re not a bad author, so did you just take the events and flesh them out, perhaps cleaning up the conversations? How close are the scenes in these posts to the experience the player had? What kind of notes do you take during the game?

I ask because I would love to write actual play logs as good as these, and I can't imagine how I would build a beautiful story out of any game I've been in. Admittedly, I imagine this has more to do with the quality of the game sessions I am in and less about any difficulty to translate them into interesting prose.

Just curious...

Odie
07-28-2004, 01:35 PM
Jesus I want to run/play Demon now. *looks longingly at his books*

Sounds like a great game! Wish I were in it. Props!

-B

Emprint
07-28-2004, 02:10 PM
Scene 6- Mitch's Apartment Building

Xariel hears a gunshot, and lands on a fire escape, passing back into the material world as he does. Mitch is asleep, but he's standing with his pistol drawn and ready to fire. The last shot damaged the window, so Xariel sees no harm in crashing the rest of the way through it, the storm finding its way in behind him. Before he even hits the floor inside he's crossed into the spirit world.

The angel finds himself standing in the darkness. He sees no figure of Mitch, here, just the bright, hard light of the detective's soul, shining forth from some arbitrary point. It's struggling with something. Xariel can't see the sending... and then he realizes the darkness is alive. This sending is fluid, inky, indigo, and swarms around Mitch, as if to drown him. Xariel reaches towards his friend, and tries to draw him out. No dice. He pulls harder, and finally rips the soul free of the body.

The liquid blue swirls towards him, Sandalphon's face reflected in it. Xariel reaches his hand out and touches it, willing it away, scattering it in all directions. Taking Mitch's soul into himself, he flies quickly to street level.

He makes a series of calls to 911 from different payphones, making sure Mitch and Jill's bodies are taken care of, and sent to Cook County Hospital. Then, he flies back to the inscription.

Kneeling on the inscription, Xariel puts his hand into the sparkling water running over it. He closes his eyes, thinks Trust me. The sparkle of the water flows into his hands. Jill's soul comes softly into him.

Now comes the hard part. I'm tempted to pray.

Emprint
07-28-2004, 02:11 PM
Scene 7- Hospital Ambulance Entrance

The strain of carrying three-and-then-a-bit souls is starting to tax Xariel. The shreds of spiritual energy he's managed to absorb since escaping the Pit are nearly gone. So it's as just plain Max that he skulks in the shadows by the ambulance entry.

He spots Mitch's body, first. He gathers the cop's soul in his hand, and blows it towards the body. With a sharp intake of breath, it enters Mitch. The paramedics moving him babble something.

It's several more agonizing minutes waiting for Jill. And when she arrives, the paramedics seem much more excited. Max doesn't know much about medicine, but he recognizes a saline drip. Getting as close as he can, he wills her soul forth. It doesn't want to stick. He closes his eyes, and pushes again, putting in everything he has left. The soul holds, and then Max's body wants to do nothing more than collapse.

Emprint
07-28-2004, 02:11 PM
Scene 8- Hospital Lobby

With Xariel drained, Max's body is mortal again. Still, he manages to pull himself to the lobby, where he gets the attention of a receptionist. After assuring the young man he's alright, Xariel asks where Jill and Mitch are. Mitch is in a room upstairs, Jill in the emergency ward. Xariel gives the receptionist his old badge number, and leaves instructions that they be transferred to the same room once Jill is stable.

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07-28-2004, 02:13 PM
Scene 9- Emergency Ward

Xariel passes a kid with broken arm and various people with less obvious maladies as he walks through the emergency reception area. He stops, only for a moment, to glance at a television. CNN. A frizzy-haired white woman is shouting at a very tolerant looking young black man. The footage of Lucifer's appearance is looping behind them. Xariel can't hear what they're saying, then turns to find Jill.

He has to wait outside for nearly half an hour. After the medics finish whatever they're doing for her, he speaks to one of the doctors. He tells the doctor no, he isn't her father, he's Detective Harris, and will she be alright? The doctor tells him he doesn't know.

Xariel sits down. There's nothing he can really do for Jill, now. He contemplates that momentarily, then stands again. He closes his eyes, and listens. Yes, he hears prayers, hears the dying calling out for him. He only needs one of them.

He walks down the corridor and up a flight of stairs. He walks into a room; the sole occupant's name is, according to his chart, Alphonse MacDonald. He's an old man, or at least he looks it- he's probably only five or six years older than Max. He's dying of cancer. His pancreas.

Xariel watches him a moment, then wakes him. Alphonse opens his eyes to see a somewhat disheveled man in rain-soaked clothing standing over him.

"Do you believe in life after death, Alphonse?"

"I don't know," the old man stammers, coughing a little. "I want to."

Xariel thinks of his battle with Usiel. "I can promise that there is something after this, though." A beat, then Xariel unveils his angelic form. "Are you ready to go?"

"I guess."

"Then close your eyes, and trust me." Xariel takes the man's hand and closes his own eyes. He crosses over with the spirit, and then lets it go. He hears a distant twinkling of chimes, and there's a flash in front of his eyelids, but it's gone when he opens his eyes. He moves back into the physical world, where a machine by the bed is whining angrily.

Xariel glances at the machine a moment, then walks towards the door. His feelings are mixed- he's buoyed by the faith he absorbed from Alphonse, and by having served his role. At the same time, he exploited a human being again. Is that right?

He feels something crunch beneath his shoe as he walks out the door. Frowning, he picks up a muddied, broken white feather. The angel puts it in his pocket and leaves.

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07-28-2004, 02:54 PM
Scene 10- Jill's Room

Jill's room is dark as Xariel slips in, past a sleeping nurse. She's on various drips, including what looks like blood. He gazes at her, tuning his vision to the rhythm of her slow, shallow breaths. Her soul is anchored to her body, but only by the most tenuous of threads. For all intents and purposes, Jill isn't there.

Xariel draws his scalpel. Funny how patterns repeat themselves. Xariel's blades were made with thin channels, to form a vacuum and suck the blood and spirit from a body. In the center of each of them is a bit of the void beyond the spirit world. Roughly the same technique would be applied millennia later, in Italy, in the rapiers his sword so much resembles.

Xariel draws his scalpel, and quickly slices across his finger. The neat white edge draws in blood, and part of Xariel. He holds the blade over Jill's neck, and pushes the substance back out. The droplets of blood fall, and disappear into her skin. She breathes in deeply, and the patterns on the machines change. Xariel can feel her soul settle back in. As he walks out, he notices something- her left wrist and forearm are bandaged.

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07-28-2004, 02:54 PM
Scene 11- Emergency Ward Reception Area

An orderly gets Xariel some coffee as he sits heavily down. He sees a doctor rush back towards Jill's room. A radio is playing in the background, static scraping the signal. A smooth, deep voice pours out past the static.

"It's a cold and rainy night out there, ladies and gentlemen. The kind of night to spend with someone you're close to. But we can't always be with the ones we love, and that's why I like to play a few requests. This first one's for 'Xariel,' from an old flame."

Xariel listens, and the static gets worse, but he can hear a pop ballad from a few years back. Something his daughter might have listened to. He tries to place the artist. Max's daughter, that is.

The song winds on, to a refrain... "Don't look back, you can never look back." The same message the Lost Girl gave him. The song fades away, back to the announcer.

"I hope that brought a little warmth to some of the chilly hearts out there. Have a good night, ladies and gentlemen. This is W*static*, Radio Free Death. The voice of the afterlife, signing off."

It's time to move forward. Xariel has to do something he's been avoiding. He has to tell them the truth.

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07-28-2004, 02:55 PM
Scene 12- Mitch's Room

Deeper in the night. As Xariel instructed, Jill has been brought here. She's asleep, but Mitch is watching TV, flipping channels. News networks. Every one of them has a different banner. "One Nation Under God?" asks Fox News, "Angels in America" blares MSNBC, "City of Angels" says CNN.

"Hey," Xariel says.

Mitch smiles from behind a two AM shadow. "Hey, Max."

"How are you feeling?"

"Okay, I guess. Doctors say I had a seizure."

Xariel shrugs that by.

"They brought Jill in here. You have them do that?"

"Yes."

"You know something, Max?" It's barely a question.

Xariel takes a breath. "Jill, are you awake?"

"I'm giving it a try," she responds weakly.

Xariel begins to explain what Simon Holmes is up to, then what he is. Jill interrupts.

"He got the shelter, too."

Xariel looks at her- he hadn't known that.

"Holmes dropped by in person. {{Branche}} decided to evict us. Next week. It all seemed so... hopeless. That's why I..." she raises her bandaged arm. Xariel makes the connection- that's why her soul seemed ready to leave. She was dying already, sending notwithstanding. "I'm sorry," she says.

"We're hardly the ones to apologize to, Jill." But Xariel can't help think. They weren't meant to die. And they sure as hell weren't meant to kill themselves.

Xariel gets back to his story. "Those sendings- the nightmares you both had- they were part of the same plan. He was trying to force me to make a choice." And he did, even if it wasn't the one he was expecting.

"Why was this... angel... after you, Max?"

Xariel looks into Mitch's eyes. He doesn't know what the younger man is expecting, but he doubts he's guessed the truth. That's what he tells. The truth. About how Max dwindled away, alone in an apartment with a bottle and not enough memories. And how Xariel filled up the empty parts.

Mitch puts a hand to his head. He doesn't totally comprehend it, but he's been on the job long enough that that won't stop him from asking the important questions. "Fine," he says. "So how do we stop this Holmes?"

"Do you believe in love?" There's a long silence.

"I guess," Jill says.

"I'm giving it a try," Mitch says, sarcastically.

"You both do. Jill, that's why you work day in and day out for those kids. And you, Mitch, you believe in it. You love your fellow man. That's why it tears you up to see kids like Kelly Frost die. That's why you want to stop the Dominion."

Mitch grumbles. Xariel still hasn't answered his question.

"Love is why I rebelled against God. It's why I need to put this right. And to do that, I need you two to believe in me."

Jill replies quicker and more dramatically than he expected. "Give me the strength and I'll follow you."

Xariel smiles at her. Mitch just sits up and shakes his head.

"Look, Max, I don't get all of this. But this isn't your job anymore. If you're Max, well... there's a reason you retired. And if you're an angel, this is our world now. I don't know if you've noticed, but it's not paradise out there anymore. I'm your friend, Max. But I can't believe in you."

That hurts Xariel more than he expected. Jill, he didn't know about, but Mitch... well, your partner's supposed to stick by you. "I understand. But if you can't help me, then stay out this."

"You know I can't do that, Max."

Max does know that. Xariel grabs a piece of paper, and scribbles on it. "Look, if you go after him, and you're in trouble, just say that name."

Mitch looks at the name for a long moment. "I will."

Xariel gives another piece of paper to Jill, this one with an address on it. "This is just outside the Tombs. If there's trouble, you'll be safe there."

"Just give me strength," she repeats.

"The strength I can give is already in you, Jill."

He exchanges an uncertain look with Mitch, then turns to leave.

"Max!" Mitch calls after him. "Be careful. Your daughter doesn't like me as is."

Tired, Xariel goes home. Takes a cab, this time.

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07-28-2004, 02:57 PM
Scene 13- Max's Apartment

The rain has settled to a drizzle outside Max's apartment. Sunrise isn't too far off. Xariel walks in. He looks at his wall for a long moment, then starts taking down the files from the Kelly Frost investigation. No need for them, anymore.

"I'm glad you're back," says a voice from behind him. He spins. On the couch is a woman in a nice, if outdated suit. Her features are a little Lauren Bacall, a little Sophia Loren, a little of any number of screen stars Max remembers. Her hat, an elegant number that would be more at home in the forties, sits next to an alligator purse.

"You've got to help me, Xariel. I'm in trouble. Bad trouble."

Fade out.

End Series 1

Next Episode: Bette Davis Eyes

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07-28-2004, 03:33 PM
Thanks, Craig. From the guy who does TNW, that's very cool to hear.

And Odie, I hear ya. Took me a year to get this game kicked off.

How do you go about translating a session to this story? Obviously you’re not a bad author, so did you just take the events and flesh them out, perhaps cleaning up the conversations? How close are the scenes in these posts to the experience the player had? What kind of notes do you take during the game?

Most of the hard work here is actually the session prep and the session itself. I do a lot of working on voices, gestures, and setting concept stuff.

Probably the biggest change here is that you're reading a single narrative voice, instead of two guys sitting and talking back and forth.

In-session, I make little notes about characters and locations, and anything that was said that I think I'm likely not to remember. I'm pretty good about repeating my own scene descriptions.

The hardest part of doing the writeup is capturing the acting. In-game, Jeff and I do a lot of gesturing and facial expression. Turning that into quick descriptions for the writeup is something of a challenge.

As for conversations, I don't do much to them except shorten them. When there's just two people at the table, I don't find that much cleanup is necessary.

Craig Oxbrow
07-28-2004, 04:58 PM
Thanks, Craig. From the guy who does TNW, that's very cool to hear.
TWH is me (with brainstorming and ideas from my players and others), TNW is SteveD (with brainstorming and the odd episode idea from me, among others). But thanks for the near-miss compliment. :D

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07-28-2004, 08:26 PM
Uh, right, you're welcome to it. I did mean TWH, of course. :D