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fuuryoku
12-22-2004, 11:56 AM
Been away for a while working on my Masters thesis, so I haven't been showing much work, here or on Epilogue. Since I've been granted an extension on that though, I can get back to the tablet again. Starting with something simple- a figure against a background.

The background is going to get swapped out for something else in the same color range, possibly a cityscape-ish, but the figure is basically done so I thought I'd get some opinions/criticism from the pro community.

http://www.thomscottart.com/images/elfmodern.jpg

jmucchiello
12-23-2004, 01:46 PM
The background is going to get swapped out for something else in the same color range, possibly a cityscape-ish, but the figure is basically done so I thought I'd get some opinions/criticism from the pro community.The wrist guard, bracer doesn't seem to have any weight to it. It looks painted on.

Where can she store that knife?

Having summoned some eldritch ball of energy, is that really a good way to rotate one's arm to hold that energy?

Said ball illuminates her hand but not her inner wrist.

The range of values in her facial skin tones implies a lot of light that is not reflected in her hair.

That should be enough nitpicking. Nice piece.