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02-27-2009, 11:35 PM
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Lawful Good Anarchist
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Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Melbourne, Australia
Posts: 1,212
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Re: [RPG]: Summerland, reviewed by Lev Lafayette (4/3)
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Originally Posted by The Black Hack
Um, mr Laffayette, I so like your reviews but boy is your writing sloppy!!
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Yeah, my bad. I am quite apologetic both the authors and reviewers for the quality of my writing in this review. Not my best effort
The sentence "What is notable, and somewhat surprising, is that no specific" should continue with "background is provided".
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