A mostly useful review, but pretty clearly not proof-read. Normally this wouldn't be an issue, but sentences like this one:
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... just bring the reader to a halt, stunned and confused. There's a number of such collisions in the review, which obscures the very in-depth look at what sounds to be a very good book.
I especially like the comparison to old school D&D. That's both clever and a great idea on how to use this book, even for folks like me who are only casual fans of the movies (of which there were only two, in my universe -- Lucas tragically died before foisting singing, hang-gliding teddy bears on us).