Post originally by Shannon Appelcline at 2003-04-16 16:23:34
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You asked for feedback on the review, so here you go:

Overall, I find fiction exceedingly hard to review, and the one piece of fiction that I reviewed for RPGnet I was never entirely happy with.

However, you seem to do a good job. You concentrate on the physicality of the book to try and map its style, and also talk about the actual content in quite a few ways. You highlighted which points people might like and which points people might not. All good things.

If I were to suggest ways to do things differently I'd say:
* Provide category headings to break up a longer review like this.
* Provide a bit more context to explain how this novel exists within the world of the RPG (as it's one I'm unfamiliar with I don't know how representative this story is of stories within the game).
* Use HTML. You'll want to, for example, bold or headline those category headings. You can also use anchor links to connect up those URLs so that people can click through.