Post originally by Josh Harrison at 2003-05-12 23:09:31
Converted from Phorums BB System

Hi there. Always nice to see somebody else join the club, giving their opinions on this stuff.

I haven't actually read your review yet, but a few things jumped out at me right off that you may want to keep in mind for future reviews.

(1) Paragraphs are your friends. Use them judiciously. Large blocks of text with no line breaks are bad.

(2) It may be online, but the normal rules of punctiation and grammar apply -- capitalize the first letter of your sentences, and generally make the article look like it would in "print." It's a lot easier to read and digest if you don't have to "translate" it.

Just a couple of friendly suggestions, as the only way to get better is to make mistakes, receive constructive criticism, and implement suggested changes.

-- Josh Harrison
"If you're not having fun, you're not playing the game right."