Post originally by NPC Malleus at 2003-05-06 14:42:15
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I got brave and started reading the body of the review. This paragraph struck me as odd:

"The book is nicely done, and has far fewer grammatical, and spelling errors than the core book did. It definately seems like there was less of a rush job to get this out than there was with the main rulebook, which is quite a good thing. while I was definately impatient for its release, im glad they waited it out."

Hmmm ... while we're on the topic of grammar and spelling, your paragraph has the following mistakes:

* grammatical, [no comma]
* definately [definitely]
* while [While]
* definately (again)
* im [I'm]

Six mistakes in one small paragraph ("im" counts twice). And you're talking about finding mistakes in someone else's work?! How can you possibly expect anyone to take your review seriously? I'm really starting to think you're a troll.

And is it *so* hard to hit shift at the beginning of a new sentence?

M