Post originally by Ed McEneely at 2003-05-13 07:56:03
Converted from Phorums BB System

I think the problem is that "stream-of-conciousness" writing is very post-modern, whereas a good review usually has too much punctuation to be post-modern.

Or, to put it in a less ironic fashion, the sentence is in fact a run-on sentence, and it's also missing a comma. This makes it hard to parse.