Post originally by Yamo at 2003-06-20 10:10:18
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I should have proofread this a little better...

a) First off, my intro. "...most overdue product in the roleplaying history...?" That's just wonky English. Oops.

b) "Everburning Fire Burst" should be "Everburning Fire Blast."

c) The final chapter contains two extended character creation examples, not three.

Of course, this was only my first review. I'll hopefully do a little better next time.

Thanks for reading!