Post originally by C. Demetrius Morgan at 2003-08-20 00:33:16
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From the author: “The final edition will also have an expanded introduction (sic)

Don't know why you've put sic in - there's nothing wrong with the phrase as quoted.
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I'll have to double check to see what happened. Probably had the spellchecker on auto and it corrected the problem, which obviously shouldn't have happened as in the original quote, if memory serves, there is a spelling error. Thus the use of "sic".

Apologies to Mr. Snyder if that sentence came as as anything but a direct and faithful quote.


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I'm afraid your paragraph on the mechanics didn't enable me to understand how they work.

I didn't get enough clues to understand what the setting's like either.
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Background information in the playtest is a bit sparse, hinting at a lot, but providing only a barebones minimalistic overview of the setting.


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Overall, your review tells us what you thought of it, but not much actually about it.
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Please try to keep in mind what this is, a capsule review of a playtest.

Obviously what is presented is not complete, it can't be as the rules reviewed provide but a "taste" of the recipe that the author has in mind to bake.


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By the way, you don't "peak" interest, you "pique" it.
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Thanks for pointing the error out.