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RE: Minor Details That I Got Wrong
Post originally by Tim Gray at 2004-02-16 05:49:57
Converted from Phorums BB System
"For instance, I normally read "church" as any place of community religious worship - a mosque is a kind of church, as is a synagogue or a Catholic cathedral."
"Church" is specifically Christian. If you want to be general, use "places of worship" - it'll lose you fewer friends in the non-Christian communities.
I think I raised some similar points to yours in my HQ review. Basically, they needed to put themselves in the reader's position a bit more, and provide information accordingly.
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