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Old 09-03-2004, 08:26 PM
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RE: Haiku

Post originally by Little_Rat at 2004-09-03 19:26:45
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The dark vampire
Always travels with the pack
And makes himself known.
With his deep undead footprints
he represents the white wolf.

No need to be harsh
Unless I have mistaken
Your simplicity.
One can sound quite blunt and curt
when employing this style.

An allusion then
To the shadowy pale ghosts
With mascara tears?
Your annoyance understood
Why cry in suburbia?

Let us pause for now.
A riotous war of flame
Would scar the heart.
And my deep apologies
I used tanka form instead. (:

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