Post originally by GSH at 2004-12-17 13:30:54
Converted from Phorums BB System

It's an interesting curse, but perhaps it would have been better to separate out the flavour of the curse from the crunch. Just looking at it, it's a bit hard to pick out exactly what the curse does in terms of game mechanics.

The story aspects are interesting, but don't forget that the book has to serve as a quick reference in addition to being an interesting read. I think you are (perhaps unnecessarily) sacrificing the ability to use it as a quick reference by mixing the flavour into the mechanics description.

Also, I don't see an explanation for the Will special save anywhere.