Post originally by Paul S. at 2005-01-29 21:41:51
Converted from Phorums BB System

Very good of ya'll to offer a reformatted edition so soon.

It's more an editing than a layout issue, but you might review pronoun use. All of the following treatments are used; sometimes more than one occur in the same paragraph:

"The character uses his sword..."
"The character uses its sword..."
"The character uses their sword..." (Oh, he does, do they?)

Pick one option and go with it (preferably not the last one). I'm old school, so I prefer the tradiitonal "he" as the most transparent option.