Post originally by Blue Seraph at 2005-02-28 15:13:29
Converted from Phorums BB System

But I think you should refrain from mentioning the author by name in future reviews -- it gives the impression you have a grudge. I suggest using "the author" rather than the author's last name. In particular, the following sentences seemed a bit personal:

"James Earwicker hasn't played a roleplaying game published since around the early 1990's."

"But to be honest, Earwicker is not the man to produce such a game if this attempt is anything to measure by."