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Vey nice review, Paul. A couple of nitpicks:

First off, giving this book less than a 5 for Style is just nuts. It's on par with anything WotC or WW can put out. I'd have given it a 5 for substance, too. This game is very well-written and complete. AFAIC, it's the new model against which I measure other RPGs.

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Finding particular sections in this thick book can sometimes take a little work.

There's a *very* thorough index, and each major section has an icon on the left side, and each chapter has an iconic picture on the right side.

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Unfortunately, hints are all you really get.

Info about the setting is infused in the mechanics and sprinkled throughout the book. There is no big info-dump chapter, and I find this a plus. The feel of Moeller's setting is made very apparent, yet there is ample room for each group to make the game their own. You get the big picture, and then get to, as a group, decide what the almost-as-Big-Picture is on your planet.

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You start by setting the narrative rules for the game’s setting, the single world currently being invaded by those sneaky Vaylen.

I'm not sure I udnerstood what you meant by "setting the narrative rules." World Burning is simply the group defining the planet the campaign will focus upon and its Figures of Note. It sets the tone, basically, and sets up potential conflicts.

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For example, I wanted to build a rabble-rousing slave leader that would lift the world’s population to freedom based solely on the strength of his ideas, but to get there I had to give him several crime-flavored life paths (and even a stint as a student of the church!) before he had the right skills.

Did you start by picking the last lifepath you wanted (the end result) and then working backwards? That's the key to "I know what I want" chargen in BE.

And again, having to work through the lifepaths is one of the ways the setting comes to the forefront.

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There are precious few ways either side simply gets what they want via the conflict mechanics; unless you’ve escaped the conflict unscathed, each side wins something every time the dice get rolled.

It depends. Most of the die-rolling you do is going to be simple versus tests, where the winner gets what they want, period. The big conflicts are where concessions are likely, depending on the severity of the loss.

However, you can always walk away from a conflict, or escalate. There is no requirement that you engage in a conflict and make concessions.

Personally, I think this makes the game more interesting, as it's very rare the loser will be totally shut out from having input on the game. I think this is simply part-and-parcel of using conflict resolution, as opposed to task resolution.

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Next up is working out a highly formalized series of “maneuvers” that represent what’s going on in the setting’s big picture.

This isn't entirely accurate.

Infection (i.e., the campaign) has three phases: Infiltration (not "Incursion"), Usurpation, and Invasion. When you start a phase, each side (the players and the GM) pick an overall goal for that phase (the GM picks his in secret before the players do). A phase will then be comprised of all the sessions of play it takes to work towards that goal. Each session, you play through 1-2 Manuevers, i.e., goals for that particular session, ideally in service to your overall goal. You don't pick a Manuever until the start of that session. There is no planning out of Manuevers in advance. You have to play through one Manuever before you can move on to another.

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The group decides if you’re going to play just one segment of the fight, or go through all three.

Again, this is not decided in advance. You simply start a phase, play through, and then, at the end, decide if you want to move on or start a new world.

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There’s no direct relationship between what’s going on in the Big Picture and what happens in individual scenes (other than strongly encouraging the focal character on each side to choose a relevant skill to resolve the maneuver). I think the game would be very easy to modify to take into account individual scene successes playing into the big Maneuver roll, but that’s not the designer’s intent.

What happens in individual scenes has everything to do with the Big Picture. The scenes are your currency for accomplishing your Manuever, which is how you impact the flow of the campaign. Everything builds up towards affecting the other side's Disposition. To quote from the rules:

"Within the scenes, the players use their characters’ abilities to initiate and resolve conflicts. These conflicts are tests for the character. Tests earn experience and reward, and they grant a small degree of narrative control with which the player can push his agenda forward. In order to enact the strategy decided upon for the phase, session and maneuver, a player must engage his character in a series of conflicts."

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So you’ve got these scenes sketched out and agreed to by the player’s “side” of the equation.

Again, you do not sketch out or agree to scenes in advance. You let the game flow like any other RPG, with the knowledge that you've got one big conflict per side per Manuever, so you have to start pushing your agenda ASAP and mustering your resources. The game simply codfiies the different types of scenes, and adds some wrinkles for when a given type is being played.

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Rather than getting deeply invested in your character’s goals and in making him more badass, Burning Empires holds the players and their characters at arms’ length.

As I said above, I don't necessarily agree with this. Your characters goals are the most important thing in BE. That's the whole point of Beliefs, which are pivotal to BW and BE. Pursuing and achieveing your goals, i.e., Beliefs, is one of the primary ways you earn Artha. The game actively encourages you to not hold your character at arm's length.

Not to mention, PCs in BE start out pretty badass. They are the movers and shakers. Over the course of a campaign, earning Artha and tests to improve their skills/stats can make them even more badass. That badassitude will then give them more power over the outcome of Manuevers and Phases.

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Given the World Burning process and the Infection mechanics, this sci-fi game appears to have very, very little relevant space travel.

FYI, this is very much in keeping with the Iron Empires comics, at least the ones published so far. The focus is always is on the fate of a given world.

That said, there's nothing preventing groups from running epic spaceship combats and zipping from planet to planet in the course of deciding their world's fate.