[C.W.Richeson]

I just completely reread that section. I think you do a fine job discussing intent there. I wish there was more self defense discussion and that hurting other supernaturals had the same moral concerns that hurting humans does, but I am absolutely mistaken in my review that you do a poor job handling intent - you cover all the major crimes and clearly convey the importance of intent to the reader.

Thanks for posting, I wouldn't have gone back through if you hadn't.