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Originally Posted by yorrick
Spying mock haiku
Mr. Richeson groans, shakes head,
And says, "No thank you."

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*laughs* That I like
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Originally Posted by chadu
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It's just such a large inclusion in a small product. A little more than 5% of the product is your poetry

While I think it's surprisingly well done, given that I found it in an RPG supplement about a giant turtle, I don't think it inspires the reader (in an adventure prep sense) or otherwise contributes to the goal of the product - running a short adventure in Truth & Justice.
I had never been exposed to Wallace Stevens before

You are just communicating far beyond my level!