[Starshield]

Ok, I bought this and really, really love it. It's extremely funny to read, and the ideas are first class. I love the illustrations for their combination of creepy and childlike. One tiny criticism. There are a lot of grammatical errors that appear to have been left after a tense change in the sentence or a quick rewrite, leaving little artifacts behind in the language. So it could have been edited better. Also, and this may just be a Macintosh problem, but the pdf converts every occurence of "Th" to the ligature "ff". It makes the reading a little lispy. Let me know when you re-edit it. I'd like a copy. But for now, it's so good that I don't mind the errors. Seriously.