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Old 06-12-2008, 07:27 AM
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Re: Not informed and not witty either

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Originally Posted by Roodah View Post
As far as the quality of the review and the writing... There's nothing here to like. You have attempted to sound pithy, edgy, and witty without actually having any ability to do so. Instead your review comes across as inept, pedantic, sophomoric, and overly shrill. Rather than examine the material you are more interested in making yourself look clever and failing.
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* Read the book
* Play the game
* Don't try to sound wittier than you really are

Let's hope the next reviewer of the book actually reads through it and plays a session first.
Attack the review, not the reviewer. I haven't modded up again yet, but this is the kind of thing that lets me know that it's time.

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