230. Two Thirty. Tooth Hurty.I'm afraid I don't see the relation of reference. Would you care to explain?
Whatever's easier really. We can certainly have comments on choiceless progressions.Although I'm loath to criticize the author since he's made a fine job so far, admittedly presenting two options so unbalanced in size and detail is a bit of a faux pas.
By the way, I've been thinking about one of the reasons for the delay. In the instance above, as in quite a few others, I have to post two or three sections in one go, since no real choice is given us. Another approach might be to post each section once it's completed and duly edited (I often heavily edit my rough draft).
The advantage is that the thread would be updated more often (hopefully). The disadvantage would be that after some updates, you would not be expected to play. (You should of course feel free to otherwise comment at all times. On my translation, on our current situation, on other comments, what have you.)